Self Critique

So the more I edit the more I am understanding and seem to like. With this final revise I am more happy with the results. I want to continue with this documentary later in the future. I took a lot of things out by listening to what the class had to say. I became bitter with the situation sometime but the more I kept going the more I learn from it. The only thing I wish I had for the documentary is a lot of B-Roll. Again I would love to continue with this documentary and I know my next documentary will be better.